Here’s a revised version of your story:
The Story of My Life
There was a time when I believed I was different—distinct from everyone else. I didn’t behave like others, I didn’t see or enjoy the things they did. I thought I was strange, and honestly, it bothered me. The solution-oriented person I am decided to address this “problem.”
In my quest for change, I thought fitting in with societal expectations was the easiest route. I figured changing myself, adopting others’ values, beliefs, and attitudes, and simply coping with everything around me was the answer.
But despite my efforts, I was still unhappy. I grew sadder, more disappointed, and began to blame others, projecting my frustration onto everything. I despised the new version of myself and resented the person I had become.
Then, I recalled a scripture we learned as young children. It still resonates with me today, as I believe I’m still that young girl in spirit.
Psalm 139:13-16:
“For you created my inmost being;
you knit me together in my mother’s womb.
I praise you because I am fearfully and wonderfully made;
your works are wonderful, I know that full well.
My frame was not hidden from you when I was made in the secret place.
When I was woven together in the depths of the earth,
your eyes saw my unformed body.
All the days ordained for me are written in your book.”
And then, a powerful realization dawned on me: the truth hit me deep. The moment I accepted that I could only thrive by being the best version of myself, everything changed. It was as though light pierced through the darkness. My eyes were opened, and I felt a spiritual awakening.
I was delivered. I found life, purpose, and freedom. I embraced who I was—truly embraced me. I learned to admire and adore the person God created. I was born again… again.
I began to love others more deeply, to appreciate humankind, to be more gracious and compassionate. I grew kinder, more empathetic. It was all because of an encounter with the truth: that God is a strategic creator. Nothing about us is a mistake. We are all fearfully and wonderfully made.
Now, I am committed to building the best version of what God intended me to be. This is my mission, and I take it seriously.